Sunday, May 29, 2011

The "Gold" Wolf: Chapter ONE

Prologue
A mother has had birth to a very beautiful pup named Princess. Pack members call her Tiny... 
She was a pup to a very wealthy mother witch made her wealthy also..
Tiny and her mom go on a little trip exploring this place they found... Tiny was told to stay home in the den.. So the mother went off and never returned.. Only a few.. Strangers...



The "Gold" Wolf 

Chapter ONE


 "Mom?", Tiny said. "Is that you!?!? Finally your home! Wha-", Tiny could not finish her sentence of who she was looking at- A stranger- "Excuse me! Who are you and why are you here!?", Tiny said. The wolf just gave her an evil smirk and then at that point other wolves were coming into the den with blood on their paws...
"What did you do to my mom!?" Tiny demanded. "We do not want your mom.. we want YOU!
"AHHHHHH!" The wolf took her my the arm and- "Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!!!!!!!" Tiny screamed. 
"TINY! Whats wrong!?!?!?!!?" Millicy said with her eyes wide open. "Oh... Nothing Mllicy.. It was just a dream... I just miss my mom..",Tiny said. "DUDE! You scared me!". Millicy said. "Sorry".
"It's okay Tiny... I was coming to wake you up cause I found somthing" Said millicy. "Oh really? What?" Tiny asked. "Follow me!"Tiny followed Millicy into the forest. "See? It's a..a.... I don't know what it is.." Said Millicy. "I think that's a stone! A red stone! Wow!" Said Tiny. "Well, I don't want it do you? You deserve it. I feel bad about what happend to your mother a long time ago..." Said millicy. "Jeez thanks! I can make it into a necklace!" "Good idea Tiny", Said Millicy. "You are sucha great friend Millicy!"  "Thanks Tiny.." Said Millicy. "Wanna help me make this into a necklace!?" Asked Tiny. "Sure!", Said millicy. 
         "WHERE IS IT YOU DUMB WOLVES!!!!!!" Shouted Pine. "S-sir we had it right here!!! I'm sure we did! I-", "SHUT UP SCAR! And look at those foot prints!!!" Said pine. "Yeah so?" Asked Scar. "SO!?!?!?! SO!?!? These could be the foot prints of the wolves that took my red stone!!!" Said Pine. "Oh your right!" Said Scar. "Grr... It has the sent of..... of.... Lyraci! Grrrr... The mother of a dumb little girl wolf who took my red stone... The one with that stupid crooked paw of hers..." Said Pine. "What's wrong with her paw though sir?" Asked Scar. "She has a dint in it shaped as a swirl..." Said Pine. "Oh.." Said Scar. "I want to get that stone BACK! NOW!" Shouted Pine. "Let's go look for her then..." Said Scar looking at Pine and the two of them smiled. 
    "No not like that!" Said Tiny. "Sorry Tiny." Said Millicy. "It's  alright. Oh! I got to go! I have to go see my dad for somthing...." Said Tiny. "Alright bye Tiny hope you like your necklace!!" Said Millicy. "MILLICY! Lunch time!!!!" Shouted Millicy's mom. Tiny was walking to her father's den to have the meeting.. She felt like she was being followed....  

TO BE CONTINUED!

6 comments:

  1. can I be in a story? love it!

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  2. @kay99 sure! just tell me your animal u want to use and your animal's name!

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  3. Its a nice beginning...

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  4. Hello this is Major Toughdog Princess Tinywolf's real sister, and i like the story, but the prolouge is a bit short than others i've read btw my user on aj is Alari, and i have a blog called www.wolfquestfanz.blogspot.com its for wolfquest fans only :)

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